After reading my peer review I discovered thatmy text appeared to be wordy because I hadn't inserted any pictures and just one link to my text. So I have added pictures that I feel are relevant to my topic and will draw the readers interest in. I also found out that my writing is geared more towards parents of teens and those that have an influence over them. This was only part of my intended audience. So what I plan to do is finish my text my added the personal experiences of male and female teens as well as give information for both of them so that they can understand themselves better as well as relate to the other sex better.
I felt that my peer review was very helpful and helping me to see how I could make my writing better. It was also useful because my peer reviewer was in the age range that I am attempting to target with my text.
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