Some of things that I have considered about my webtext with regard to the instructors response to my first draft are: making sure that I have cited sources for the information that I have obtained and also organizing my text with colors that complement my topic. I have added my sources at the bottom of my text and also decided to stay with the colors that i originally started with but I have added an addition color to make my text so that the citiations stand out a little more. I added pictures and links to my text to make is more appealing to the eyes. Overall, the feedback that I have received has been very helpful and I have taken into consideration the areas where I can make my work better.
As fas as my review for my second draft I need to correct some grammatical errors as well as elaborate on some of my statistics. Yella also gave my a great idea to add a link for each STD that I take about so that my readers can get more detailed information on the subject.
Thanks for the feedback!
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